As the world becomes technologically advanced computers are replacing more and more jobs.Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result.

In the age of industrialization and modernization, technological breakthroughs are reforming the way our lives are operated.

Computers

are becoming an indispensable part

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and gradually replacing humans in many jobs.

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description of some works that can disappear due to

computers

and discussing some issues. The

first

position that may be vanished

as a result

of technological innovation is the mailman. People are no longer interested in correspondence.

Instead

of writing letters with their hands, wrapping them in uncheap covers, taking them to the post office and waiting for several days or even one week until they are delivered, people now would rather use emails or chatting applications. Within one single

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, your texts are sent, and

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more than one minute, you receive the messages back just for free. Another job I want to talk about is

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accountant. An ordinary worker can work from 8 to 12 hours a day, and sometimes they

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serious mistakes that do huge damage to the organization.

In contrast

, an accounting robot is able to work

continously

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continuously

24 hours a day, 7 days a week without any breaks and no faults are made at all during the process. They absolutely outweigh the functions of

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humans in

this

aspect.

Nevertheless

, that

computers

are now taking the works that

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should

be belonged to humans

also

results in some consequences.

Firstly

, it aggravates unemployment. Never before, do we see an increasingly alarming rate of unemployment like that

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It is really a burden that our society

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to put up with.

Last

but not least, that depending too much on

computers

is a disaster in emergencies. They are all connected to the Internet, so they are easily broken into and the

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dilemma

is unimaginable. In conclusion, scientific advances are a revolution to our world with their outstanding functions.

However

, our missions are to use them in the right way

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and minimize their negative impacts on our lives