Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these viwes and give your own opinion.
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there are some people that have several Replace the word
Every time
peroblems
in their Correct your spelling
problems
life
, such
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argument that they should accept their tough situations or Correct your spelling
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attempt
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improve
life
expactancy
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On the one hand, If folks Correct your spelling
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accepts
their current situation that some time is awful, maybe help them to enjoy their Change the verb form
accept
life
instead
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bad happen or Correct your spelling
about
this
think have to them to be live in a bad cercomistances
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circumstances
life
. For example
, those who has
many financial Change the verb form
have
problem
because of has Change to a plural noun
problems
a
insufficient revenue or even they Change the article
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don’t
have job satisfaction don’t
attepmt
to change their career or increase their salaries maybe solely with reduce their Correct your spelling
attempt
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and accept their situation help them to Correct your spelling
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wanted
enhace
their happiness or even make them Correct your spelling
enhance
depress
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On the other hand
, if people don’t
accept the tough situationd
and want to Correct your spelling
situations
situation
try
change it, it Add the particle
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have
some advantages as well as disadvantages. Change the verb form
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for instance
, if a person is not happy with their job in its outpot
and she or he decides to enhance his or her job and position and Correct your spelling
output
concequently
rise salary, maybe she or he is successful and improve their Correct your spelling
consequently
consequent
life
or cannot do it. So the former situation is beneficial but the latter one maybe
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confidens
and decrease his or her Correct your spelling
confidence
lifeexpectancy
.
To conclude, in my idea, the Correct your spelling
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life-expectancy
adults
person should be realistic in their Change to a genitive case
adult's
adults'
life
and if they are able to boost their circumestance
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circumstance
circumstances
hence
they ought to do it but they cannot change it because of some limitation, like age or don’t
have university
degree, the better Add an article
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