Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many
people
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are stuck in unpleasant situations that would decide to accept the circumstances for the rest of their
life
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or attempt to change those and improve their
life
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. In my idea,
life
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is a gift for human beings that we should try to achieve our goals and feel happy
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of being stuck in a terrible situation without any try to boost it. On the one hand, those who prefer to go through a hard
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in
life
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,
such
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as insufficient income and unsatisfactory job, it is depended on their personality and most of the
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they have a weak personality and cannot accept the challenge and rise in their
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and even
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do anything without having certain information about the future and its result.
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, they
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try to change their job and increase their salary and live in dire economic conditions
entire
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the entire
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of their
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.
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, these
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feel frustrated and depressed in their
life
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most of the
time
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.
On the other hand
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, some
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attempt to boost their
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expectancy and work relentlessly to pursue their goals. These
people
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have a powerful
personality
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personalities
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and
don’t
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give up in tough circumstances and they deal with hardships in their
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every
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.
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, those who are not content with their career and have an economic downturn and
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accept the miserable situation so they work more and try to improve their abilities that get promoted in their job and
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increase their revenues. thereby, they can be happier and satisfied with tire
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. To conclude,despite the fact that hard times in
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cannot be avoided, I think that
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has
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worth fighting to have a better experience and try to achieve all of our goals even we need to try hard.
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, there is a famous word among Iranian
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that is
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‘ no pain no gain’.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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