In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many
thinks
that a plethora of Change the verb form
think
people
who have some diseases for having unhealthy
diet and eating more fast Add an article
an unhealthy
foods
. Therefore
it is believed that governments
force people
to pay more taxes for these products. According
the nature of Add the preposition
toAccording
humanbeing
, Correct your spelling
human being
people
can give up when they paying enormous prices
to
Change preposition
for
the
goods and it is Correct article usage
apply
widespread
thought to shape Replace the word
widely
people
’s behaviour.
On the one hand, although
people
in many countries suffering from eating fast foods
, some people
think that all people
have Correct article usage
the rights
rights
Fix the agreement mistake
right
about
access Change preposition
to
foods
with
reasonable Change preposition
at
prices
. Because forcing people
to pay more prices
is not fair when trying to solve this
problem. Besides
, according
Add the preposition
toaccording
the
their opinion, Remove the article
apply
governments
should more attention to the amount of consumption in order to give chance to people
to balanced
diet. Add an article
a balanced
For example
,although
a friend of mine has reached 200 kg. , he continues to eat hamburger
Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
everyday
from the same restaurant and Replace the word
every day
the
does not mind Correct article usage
apply
about
the price. If our government were forced the restaurants to bring some sales limit, Change preposition
apply
he
would not Correct pronoun usage
they
attampted
to order on a regular basis.
Correct your spelling
attempt
attempted
On the other hand
, other
thinks that Correct pronoun usage
others
governments
should arrange the tax level of these products. Because,
there are many economical problems in many Remove the comma
apply
country
and everybody choose their meals within their budget. Nobody wants to pay more when they can reach reasonable Change to a plural noun
countries
prices
and this transactions
can decrease the consumption of fast Change the determiner
this transaction
these transactions
foods
. In addition
, governments
can spend these
higher tax Correct determiner usage
this
income
to supporting other Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
people
who are suffering from obesity. The most important point to support my idea is, my mother always purchasing our meals considering the prices
. If she see a different price of the product when comparing the past, she refused to buy. However
, if someone buy
Change the verb form
buys
this
expensive product, government
will be gain more.
Taking Add an article
the government
eveything
into consideration, the most common idea is forcing Correct your spelling
everything
people
to reject some unhealthy foods
is arranging prices
with tax levels. I am totally agreeing with this
statement. Because the vital issue is economy nowadays and it can play crucial
role to Add an article
a crucial
people
’s decisions.Submitted by basakdiclesahin on
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