Many
thinksChange the verb form
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that a plethora of
people
who have some diseases for having
unhealthyAdd an article
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diet and eating more fast
foods
.
Therefore
it is believed that
governments
force
people
to pay more taxes for these products.
AccordingAdd the preposition
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the nature of
,
people
can give up when they paying enormous
prices
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goods and it is
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thought to shape
people
’s behaviour.
On the one hand,
although
people
in many countries suffering from eating fast
foods
, some
people
think that all
people
have
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rightsFix the agreement mistake
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aboutChange preposition
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access
foods
withChange preposition
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reasonable
prices
. Because forcing
people
to pay more
prices
is not fair when trying to solve
this
problem.
Besides
,
accordingAdd the preposition
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the Remove the article
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their opinion,
governments
should more attention to the amount of consumption in order to give chance to
people
to
balancedAdd an article
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diet.
For example
,
although
a friend of mine has reached 200 kg. , he continues to eat
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everydayReplace the word
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from the same restaurant and
the Correct article usage
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does not mind
about Change preposition
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the price. If our government were forced the restaurants to bring some sales limit,
heCorrect pronoun usage
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would not
to order on a regular basis.
On the other hand
,
otherCorrect pronoun usage
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thinks that
governments
should arrange the tax level of these products. Because
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there are many economical problems in many
countryChange to a plural noun
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and everybody choose their meals within their budget. Nobody wants to pay more when they can reach reasonable
prices
and
this transactionsChange the determiner
this transaction
these transactions
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can decrease the consumption of fast
foods
.
In addition
,
governments
can spend
theseCorrect determiner usage
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higher tax
incomeFix the agreement mistake
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to supporting other
people
who are suffering from obesity. The most important point to support my idea is, my mother always purchasing our meals considering the
prices
. If she see a different price of the product when comparing the past, she refused to buy.
However
, if someone
buyChange the verb form
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this
expensive product,
governmentAdd an article
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will be gain more.
Taking
into consideration, the most common idea is forcing
people
to reject some unhealthy
foods
is arranging
prices
with tax levels. I am totally agreeing with
this
statement. Because the vital issue is economy nowadays and it can play
crucialAdd an article
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role to
people
’s decisions.