Some people believe that women should stay at home and should take care of children, while others believe that women should work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The topic

whether

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women

should stay at

home

and take

care

of

children

or they should

work

is always a controversial one.

Women

opting to

work

or staying

home

to

care

for

children

,

both

have their advantages and disadvantages.

This

essay will discuss

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both

point

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points

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of

views

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view

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and provide an opinion. In

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today's

today

todays

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modern world, more

women

with

children

are choosing to balance their

career

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careers

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and family.

This

will help them to be independent and empowered. It

also

assist

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families financially and allows their

children

to study in premier educational institutions. Based on the recent study conducted by the Harvard

Universtiy

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University

it can be noted that families with

both

working parents are able to

acheive

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achieve

stability and happiness. Along

supporting

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their families financially, working

women

can utilize the knowledge and

decision making

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capabilities from their careers to model their

children

into mature adults.

Conversely

, some people argue that

women

should stay at

home

as it is very important to take

care

of the

children

untill

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until

they complete their adolescence. With the recent social media changes it has become very hard to keep track of

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what

children

are

upto

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up to

and it

also

has become very easy for

children

to fall into dangerous

ptitfalls

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pitfalls

like drugs, alcohol etc.

For example

, in a recent study on

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school going teenagers in

USA

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, it came to light that 45% of them

atleast

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at least

once used harmful substances like marijuana.

This

brings into the question

about

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whether the amount of adult supervision these

children

are receiving is enough?.

Children

are the future of any country and they should be protected from harmful forces in

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society.

Women

, given their nurturing and maternal characteristics, should stay at

home

to

fulfill

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the

responsibiltiy

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responsibility

responsibilities

of taking

care

of the

children

and raise them as responsible adults. In conclusion, some

women

choose to

work

and some opt to

be stay

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home

mothers.

This

essay discussed

both

point

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points

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of

views

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view

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and explained the reasons for respective views including financial stability and adult supervision. In my opinion, society should leave it to every

women

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woman

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whether they want to stay

home

taking

care

of the

children

or they want to go to

work

.