Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, big

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increased their financial aid to small

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. A section of the society thought that money is not a

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for poor regions for the long term

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of

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rich

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give some long

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to solve poverty

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. I strongly believe that

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for big perspective gives some other technologies which solve generations poverty

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with, aid is not a permanent

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for poor nations, rather aid those

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to give technical

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to

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and

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give some new innovation which increased their productivity. If

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have

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to make things which able to sell in the international market to fulfil their requirements.

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, The USA gives some technology to African

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like how to make solar panels due to

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in many areas they solve their electricity shortage after that they use

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electricity to produce things on the production line.

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, these

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help in the education system to develop and improve it.

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education is able to create their future generation solve their poverty.

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, if rich nation-build universities in

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poor region that produce

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new educated

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that solve their own

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.

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, these educated

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make a society without crime.

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have jobs related to their

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they get wages that reduce their financial

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and not do crimes. In conclusion, money is not able to solve

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not for long term

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those

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give

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and education to natives which help for generations.