Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that

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extra curricular

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activities

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as music,paint and drama is equally required,

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years of school. I completely agree with

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notion ,as overall development is much required by a child ,and reasons to support my view will be ventilated in upcoming fragments.

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the years in which

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adolescent can enhance and sharp his abilities. These are years in which they can get to know in which field they should go or opt for the future. By involving students

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such

activities

that are music or painting , can help them to become

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known and renowned

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in future. To demonstrate, many famous singers, nowadays, if we see their past , we come to know that their handwork

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from their childhood days makes them competent as they are now.

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the

days

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of enjoyment and fun. Only doing studies

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not the way of their overall development .By doing

activities

like sports make them help to become physically strong and escape

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the stress of their academic performance. According to a study in Cambridge

university

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, students who play sports are more active in study and they have low absents in school due to their good fitness than other students who are only book-worms. Hammering the

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nail, I would like to wrap my view and pen down by writing that I

am strongly agree

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that these

activities

are really helpful in nurturing a child fully and should be there in schools.