The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two-line graphs depict the
size
of the
ozone
hole
over Antarctica and the three damaging gases to the
ozone
layer.
Overall
, a glance at the graph reveals that CFC and N20 are the gases that cause the most damage to the
ozone
layer in the
last
two decades of the twentieth century.
Initially
, in the
year
1980, the
size
of the
ozone
hole
was considerably smaller below thousand square
kilometers
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. Over the years the
size
of the
ozone
hole
increased significantly. In the
year
1990, the
size
of the
ozone
hole
expanded
over
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two thousand square
kilometers
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kilometres
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.
This
was followed by a steady decline in the
size
in the
year
1993.
Further
after the
year
1993, the
size
of the
ozone
hole
expanded to above 4000 square
kilometers
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kilometres
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which
were
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was
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significantly larger than any other
year
. In the
second
graph, first two decades the amount of N20 Gas was higher at about 60
million
tons
but during the later
years
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the production of N20 declined drastically. In 1980, the amount of
CFC-
11 and
CFC-
12
were
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was
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lower at 30
million
tons
. In 1990, the amount of
CFC-
11 And
CFC-
12 rose dramatically. In the subsequent years,
CFC-
12 reached above 40
million
tons
while
CFC-
11 rose above 20
million
tons
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words size, ozone, hole, year, million, tons, cfc- with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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