The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
We have a program about changing our existing floor project. In
this
arrangement when you open the entrance door at the right you see stairs that go to the arcade
and living room. If you look straight, you'll see a hall and storage which are placed under the stairs. On the second
floor, we have two internal doors. Forgo to rooms.But this
idea has some bad opportunities. We want to make stairs
round-shaped and Correct article usage
the stairs
also
we want to take this
end of the hall. Then
we have a lot of space for the living room. However
, we don't have any space for storage but it is OK. On the left side of the entrance is an internal door to which you can go the arcade
and you can enter the arcade
with a second
entrance door for both plans. In both plans, we have 4 windows but in the proposed program, we have an item of arcade
furniture. This
is placed next
to the window. I think in the Proposed treatment we have a lot of space than the existing intentionSubmitted by metin.memmedli06 on
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