The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
We have a program about changing our existing floor project. In
this
arrangement when you open the entrance door at the right you see stairs that go to the
arcade
and living room. If you look straight, you'll see a hall and storage which are placed under the stairs. On the
second
floor, we have two internal doors. Forgo to rooms.But
this
idea has some bad opportunities. We want to make
stairs
Correct article usage
the stairs
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round-shaped and
also
we want to take
this
end of the hall.
Then
we have a lot of space for the living room.
However
, we don't have any space for storage but it is OK. On the left side of the entrance is an internal door to which you can go the
arcade
and you can enter the
arcade
with a
second
entrance door for both plans. In both plans, we have 4 windows but in the proposed program, we have an item of
arcade
furniture.
This
is placed
next
to the window. I think in the Proposed treatment we have a lot of space than the existing intention
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Vocabulary: Replace the words arcade with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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