Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

At present, there are many
countries
which have their own
languages
. All
languages
have different sources and are
also
valuable. In the same way,
languages
are crucial roles to communicate for learning
culture
and businesses. The different
languages
showed that many
people
came from different
countries
and nationalities to exchange and learn
culture
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and
also
has
behavior
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behaviour
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.
For example
, the Chinese
language
which is different accents and sometimes
be
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not used in the same word based on the area because China has massive areas and most
people
from other
countries
have access to do business and
also
has historically more than thousands of years.
Therefore
,
people
can learn the traditional
culture
via
languages
and ancient architecture.
On the other hand
, some
languages
have
minority
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using or rarely spoke.
For instance
, the Arabic
language
is especially used by Moslem
people
and most of being used to communicate in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, etc. Some
languages
might not use worldwide, whereas
English
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language
most
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popular in almost all
countries
.
In contrast
, some
languages
are not widely used but they can expand
languages
via religion. At present, the Arabic
language
became Moslem’s
language
which is used widely. I think, if minority
languages
die out, the
culture
would be lost. In conclusion, I completely disagree that there are fewer
languages
in the world, your life will be easier because all
languages
blend between
culture
and living of ancient, so no matter what
languages
are significant to preserve and should not be forgotten. We should conserve our
language
for
next
-generation, they will take the knowledge of history and
culture
of their own country to improve in their life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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