It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Nowadays, education for

children

is very important, especially about the issue of teaching

children

how to differentiate the right thing and the wrong thing. And there are arguments about whether or not

parents

and teachers should use

punishment

as a compulsory method in delivering that goal. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the use of

punishment

and I suggest other good teaching methods which can help students know the right thing to do without suffering from punitive measures. I disagree with the statement that

children

will be able to distinguish between right and wrong if they receive

punishment

from adults. The main reason is that as human beings we all have lessons to take out from every single

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that we did .If

parents

are able to remember all the mistakes they made in their childhood, they might be able to stand in their child's shoes and empathize with what their child has been through.

Furthermore

, I believe that

punishment

, especially physical discipline , doesn’t help the

children

but only limits

parents

to communicate effectively with the

kids

. Since the

kids

will only focus on the pain that they are receiving, not the contents that the adult wants to deliver. Adults could replace

punishment

with other alternative teaching methods ,

such

as

through

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giving advice and becoming

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role

model

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for the

kids

.

Such

as that can complement that good deed of others and emphasize

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significant and ethical aspects of the deed. As well as teaching the child through their own experience and mistakes , as a way to build the reliability and relationship for the

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children

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to seek adult suggestions on their own willingness. In conclusion, I discouraged the method of

punishment

in the education systems due to the fact that it’s not effective and can potentially hurt the relationship between

the

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kids

and adults. Where there are many other different ways for

parents

to discipline their

kids

,

for

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