Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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the same beliefs as them,while some argue that having different

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should be accepted. I think that both

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beneficial in life. It is human nature to have

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in life and

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shape who we are. Some

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want only

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similar perspectives with them in their life.

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in everything.

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humans find it difficult to make valid points when they are involved in an argument

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the need for someone to always side with their views.

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when he finds himself in an argument with others

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, is derived from a person's upbringing where he/she was never corrected of their shortfalls.

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, having

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who sometimes disagree with you is necessary as it shapes one's character.

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who are open to different views by their

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have room to grow mentally and emotionally.

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, they can be good at debate. A good example is when politicians go on live television to debate about what they can offer to the masses once they are elected, they can freely argue with their counterparts without becoming emotional ,

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can easily accept

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help

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to see things from a different perspective and

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learn from their mistakes. To conclude, I believe that as much as we want to

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Topic Vocabulary:

harmonious
stress-free
disagreements
conflicts
reinforce
validate
comforting
reassuring
broaden your understanding
perspectives
challenge intellectually
think critically
personal growth
development
healthy debates
communication skills
mutual respect

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many food and drink prodcuts contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary Products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There are currently many endangered species at risk of extinction and it’s equally important to save all of them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?