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The table provides information about independent movies which were released in the UK and Republic of Ireland by category in 2012. Overall, the total of films that showed in the UK and Ireland was 148 titles, drama and documentary were the most popular genres between two nations.
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, the highest money from selling tickets was gained from comedy in 2012. Drama and documentary were released in 35 films which were nearly a quarter (23.6%) and the percentages of money from these two types were at 8.3% and 2.9% respectively.
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-highest number of releases was a comedy which released about 26 films in 2002 less than drama and documentary.
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, income from comedy reached the highest proportion, nearly a half of all income (45.4%) and it doubled for horror movies (20.2%). In terms of horror and thriller, the figure experienced a similar percentage of about 13% but horror earned money from the British and Irish people more than thriller by approximately 19%. The other category of movies was under 10%, including biopic, crime, action romance and others.
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, the least amount of income was made by romance at 0.8%.
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