Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

It is commonly believed that human characters are based on genes before birth and personality traits can not be changed whatsoever. I disagree with the given statement and there are two reasons why I think so and they will be explained in the
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few paragraphs.
First
of all, genetic influence is
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factor and intense. It is a
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fact that genes are
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factor in human beings in every activity as it
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determines
the future course of the action by a person.
Although
some
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genetic
features are driven by external factors and can be controlled to a larger extent.
For instance
,
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memory of a person is mostly an
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inheritance
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inherent
feature
however
it can
also
be altered by means of
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eating pattern. In short, genetic behaviour
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strong and can be modified over a period of time.
Secondly
,
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advancement
advancements
can help acquire new human behaviour. Undoubtedly, with the enhancement in the
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it is now possible for people to experience
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of behaviour in the present time.
Although
it is a lengthy process to get the desired results. To
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illustrate
, communities
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faced the problem of bipolar disorder earlier can now overcome
this
issue by medication and
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counselling
.
Therefore
,
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healthcare facilities and better medicines it is possible to face the heredity
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challenges
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which was only a dream couple of decades ago. In conclusion,
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people's personalities
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by parental factors
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can be monitored by both environmental factors and better medication.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • predetermined
  • character traits
  • genetic influence
  • environmental factors
  • personality development
  • upbringing
  • foundation
  • evolution of traits
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