Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?
It is commonly believed that human characters are based on genes before birth and personality traits can not be changed whatsoever. I disagree with the given statement and there are two reasons why I think so and they will be explained in the
next
few paragraphs.
First
of all, genetic influence is internal
factor and intense. It is a Add an article
an internal
well known
fact that genes are Add a hyphen
well-known
important
factor in human beings in every activity as it Add an article
an important
detrmines
the future course of the action by a person. Correct your spelling
determines
Although
some gentic
features are driven by external factors and can be controlled to a larger extent. Correct your spelling
genetic
For instance
, sharp
memory of a person is mostly an Correct article usage
the sharp
inheritent
feature Correct your spelling
inheritance
inherited
inherent
however
it can also
be altered by means of good
eating pattern. In short, genetic behaviour Correct article usage
a good
are
strong and can be modified over a period of time.
Change the verb form
is
Secondly
, scientific technological
Add a hyphen
scientific-technological
advancemet
can help acquire new human behaviour. Undoubtedly, with the enhancement in the Correct your spelling
advancement
advancements
research
it is now possible for people to experience Add a comma
,research
new
Add an article
a new
form
of behaviour in the present time. Fix the agreement mistake
forms
Although
it is a lengthy process to get the desired results. To illustarte
, communities Correct your spelling
illustrate
which
faced the problem of bipolar disorder earlier can now overcome Correct pronoun usage
that
this
issue by medication and counciling
. Correct your spelling
counselling
Therefore
, good
healthcare facilities and better medicines it is possible to face the heredity Change preposition
with good
challanges
which was only a dream couple of decades ago.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
challenges
challenge
although
people's personalities are strongly influence
by parental factors Change the verb form
are strongly influenced
it
can be monitored by both environmental factors and better medication.Correct pronoun usage
they
Submitted by rahat on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!