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Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#schools #time #subjects #history #people #skills #students #job
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 technology because it will
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 them to get a good job and better life in future.
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