In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of
artifical
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artificial
intellegence
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intelligence
, more and more
car
companies have released their auto-pilot solutions, and some even claimed that they will achieve Level 4 within
one
year, which means that we will have
one
big step
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forward
towards completely auto drive.
This
also
raises some discussion about the advantages and disadvantages. Though that may not be welcomed by everyone, I believe it will be a significant milestone in human history, because the majority will benefit from it and our society might change because of it.
Firstly
,
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not only means
one
car
can take
one
more passenger
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it
also
means a
car
can go somewhere without any people in it. It could solve a lot of problems we have right now,
for example
, parking. We can leave the
car
and don't have to worry about where to park, the
car
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home, or find an
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available
and cheap place to park itself, or even more, it can be temporarily rent to other people.
Secondly
, I believe that government will only permit
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autopilot
when it is proven that
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AI could drive much better and safer than
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. So in the future, I believe the government will even ban
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behind the wheel out of security concerns.
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that day, it is not hard to imagine that there will be
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car
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. To conclude, though adopting auto-drive in our
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society
could harm some people, like
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, in short term, I believe it is going to be a
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fundamental
change in our
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society
and our world will benefit so a lot from it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Human error
  • Optimize routes
  • Fuel efficiency
  • Mobility
  • Independence
  • Eco-friendly
  • Electric technologies
  • Job losses
  • Driving-related professions
  • Hacking
  • Safety and privacy
  • Significant investment
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Unavoidable accident scenarios
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