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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be what do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer

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Although
 a majority of people spend
time
 at
home
 with their family during the pandemic, they are not likely to start a conversation with them. While there are those people who believe that families are no longer close as they used to be, they are trying to find a solution to figure
this
 out. The following paragraph will discuss what are the causes of
this
 issue and how to fix it.
To begin
 with, most people work at
home
 nowadays,
therefore
 when they spend
time
 at
home
 to work, it might cause unbalancing of work-life. According to my experience,
for example
,when I studied at
home
 sone early to the evening, I would like to relax and spend my
time
 with my hobbies.
Thus
,
this
 might cause
this
 problem because I only take
time
 with myself without having a conversation with family.
This
 has bolstered the instance that fatigue from doing something might cause a problem in the relationship. In my opinion, a lot of families is struggling with
this
 problem because they have no idea how to solve it. In my opinion, what I suggest is they just spend
time
 together- have dinner together or spend
time
 during the weekend. When they gathering together, no matter what it is, I believe that their relationship will come closer.
Lastly
, there are many ways to make them closer because there is no shortcut to deal with it. The relationship in a family is sensitive, so members in the family should use the right way to fix it
otherwise
, it would be drawbacks.
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