Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing,discuss the causes and solutions.

Ways of living in towns have drastically transformed in a positive or negative way

this

essay will discuss the causes and offer solutions to

it

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of

all

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times that we are living in have proved to be very difficult the economy has seen major shifts in all sectors affecting

people

in big numbers

this

has caused a shift in the way

people

live, with

increase

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in population and

less

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jobs the

cities

have turned out to be a place where it is all about individuals well being

such

that nobody cares about the other, it a society of man eat society,the

cities

quality of life

thus

has

deteroriated

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deteriorated

such

that security is no longer a major factor.

people

run to major towns to secure employment

that is

not the case lately, actually the village is safer and life is affordable there considering food is readily available and issues related to housing .

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the number of youths that are jobless will shock you

people

living below a dollar

everyday

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is worrying sources of income are no longer available,

therefore

crime has resulted to be the only solution.

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,

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issues can easily be dealt with by dealing with corruption

head on

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and creating job

oppurtunities

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opportunities

for the youth more trainings on technical skills and naturing talent,

however

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this

will depend

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the young peoples interest in what they wish to do and learn.

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in a corruption case,corrupt leaders need

face

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the full force of the law,like

introduction

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of strict measures to anybody involved in acts that threaten the economy of the country and its

people

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Finally

,the

quaity

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quality

of life in major

cities

has greatly changed because of ignorance,corruption and poor leadership,

this

issues

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however

are very easy to tackle and bring forth a solution and sanctity to the

cities

.