Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some

people

say that have many

TV

channels

is the best way to find an interesting

program

, while others

people

disagree with

this

because

lack

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of quality

program

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programs

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that

people

have more than two

channels

to choose

, so

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this

may have

effect

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on

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the producer

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producer

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producers

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that cannot maintain qualities of

program

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the program

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. Both of

this view

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will be outlined in

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before the conclusion is reached. It

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apparent

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that having various

type

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of

TV

channels

can make

people

find any

programs

to watch, whether documentary, reality show, soap opera, romantic comedy,

sci fi

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or action.

People

who boring with some

TV

channels

can change their mind to watch other

channels

such

as

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students

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feel that educational

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did not attract them anymore, so they can switch to watch what they want by remote control.

Moreover

, adults who think news or soap opera is very boring, they can

looking

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for some new amazing

program

namely Netflix which have

many

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sort

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of movies including

sci fi

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, action movie or reality show. These

platform

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let

people

feel more enjoyable and relax.

Nonetheless

, having many

TV

channels

can be

disadvantage

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for producers. The reason is some

TV

programs

have low average ratings that make producer feels less confident and motivation. To enumerate,

programs

are affected from lack of motivation, so that lead to

drop

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of

program

quality

in particular

producers often make mistake and did not check the details, they

are give

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up,

also

think

people

can find

other

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another program

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program

to watch and there are lots of

program

with the same content and more popular.

Furthermore

, because of

this

reason, it

make

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watchers change their attitude with

TV

programs

and find

new

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one that more valuable. To summarize, it is good to have many

channels

on television because can choose various

type

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types

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of

program

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programs

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to watch but every

producers

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producer

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and station must maintain their quality and keep developing their content every

years

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.