Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The provided illustrations compare
water
consumption with 3 main purposes in various regions(North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
,
Africa
, Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
). It can be seen that North American and
Europe
used more
water
for manufacturing, while South
America
,
Africa
, Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
used more
water
for their agriculture. In detail, more than 80% of
water
in
Africa
and
Asia
is mainly used for the agricultural sector, while North
America
consumed only 39% and
Europe
at 32%. For the manufacturing sector,
Europe
and North
America
required more
water
than other regions and its ratio accounted at 53% and 48% respectively, while
Africa
and Central
Asia
comprised the smallest ratio at 7% and 5%.
In addition
, the
water
consumption for domestic purposes can be observed as the smallest portion in most regions as in
Africa
and
Asia
that share only 9% and 7% of overall
water
consumption.
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