Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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water
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consumption with 3 main purposes in various regions(North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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and Southeast
Asia
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). It can be seen that North American and
Europe
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used more
water
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for manufacturing, while South
America
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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and Southeast
Asia
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used more
water
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for their agriculture. In detail, more than 80% of
water
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in
Africa
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and
Asia
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is mainly used for the agricultural sector, while North
America
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consumed only 39% and
Europe
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at 32%. For the manufacturing sector,
Europe
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and North
America
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required more
water
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than other regions and its ratio accounted at 53% and 48% respectively, while
Africa
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and Central
Asia
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comprised the smallest ratio at 7% and 5%.
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, the
water
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consumption for domestic purposes can be observed as the smallest portion in most regions as in
Africa
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and
Asia
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that share only 9% and 7% of overall
water
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consumption.
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