Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

In
this
modern and ever-changing world, the advancement of technology like robotics completely altered the ways
people
work
in many countries.
People
have different views
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this
phenomenon. Some
people
claimed that the high-tech machine will
finally
take over human’s
jobs
whereas some
people
are argued that there will be a lot of humankind tasks which the IA are not capable to complete. Personally, I disagree with the statement because robotics
are
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not
fulled
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develop enough to cover all the
jobs
, like Artist, Specialist occupation, and Musician. It is undeniable that
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AI play an important role in
people
jobs
in many countries.Some
people
are passionate about technology and easily being trapped by the
convenient
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of high-tech.
Moreover
, they found it provided their business to save time and money more than employ
human
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humans
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.
For example
, producing
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and
magazine
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magazines
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. In the past
decade
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those tasks were completed by labour which
mean
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the entrepreneurs employed human and have to pay salary monthly In order to run their business smoothly. Another
work
that
people
can benefit from using
Robot
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is doing house
chore
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, particularly in urban society. Almost everyone
are
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not only occupied by their
work-load
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each day
,
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but
also
their precious time with the children and family.
Therefore
, some
people
are pleased and thanks for
advancement
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the advancement
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of house chore machines which
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valuable
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for the money as it has helped in
term
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of saving time and doing boring
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housework
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house
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work
. On the one hand, there are several works that are usually being done by
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a human
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human
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humans
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.
Fist
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and foremost,
Art
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work
,
this
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can be the prime example of humankind job
that is
will never be substitute by Argothrism intelligent procedure because Art is creativity performance from
people
who
has
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particular
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talent in
create
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unique
Art
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work
.
For instance
, The Mona Lisa painting by Italian artist Leonardo da Vinci.
Secondly
,
specialist
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a specialist
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job
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jobs
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such
as Doctor,Civil Engineer, and Lawyer. Those
are implement
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by
people
who
has
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qualified
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degree to be able to
work
professionally and communication with their clients is the most important part while IA Robot has incapable of interaction with
human
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a human
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.
Finally
,
musics
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music
kinds of music
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, as we know can only be produced by
man
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a man
the man
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who has the skill like Micheal Jackson who is
well-known
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a well-known
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successful musician in the world. To summarize,
although
some
people
are strongly believed that all
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human
jobs
will
be take
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over by IA Robots in the near future,there are a number of
people
argue
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and think that there are several occupations which will never be cover by the high technology machine.In my point of view, even though some
jobs
are being done by the machine,
nevertheless
many specialist
occupation
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occupations
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which can not perform by
the
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advance
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Robots.
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