In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some beneficial

informations

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stored in

books

before the

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century.Currently, with the recent technological advancements paper treasures is available

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the

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and disadvantages of online reading. Work with the

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their own benefits.

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of all,it should

to

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talk about the availability of any

information

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reliable

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source,if it

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quite rare or unknown

information

. Since

information

is abundant and there is no

storage

issue, unlike conventional

books

,

this

eliminates

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enormous

costs.

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,as previously said,

storage

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internet

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is not costs

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does not cost

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any money.But it can be

expections

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expectations

for

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option,and

storage

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the

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large volume of

information

can requires some money.But it

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that it is the better option with comparison to

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all of the

information

.

Thirdly

,if

information

are

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valueable

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valuable

or expensive,

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is reliable

storage

to preserve.Intending to collect

the

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many different

information

,

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is

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option for

this

aspect.

In addition

, the

Internet

is an easily accessible resource accessible from anywhere in the world. To access it, you do not need to make a request to a specific library or store. For these reasons, it is easy to verify that

information

stored on the

Internet

is a cheaper and more efficient way compared to

books

. But,some people believe that the knowledge contained in

books

is less risky than

the

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Internet

. With the development of technology, there is always a fear of technical failures or

cyber attacks

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cyber-attacks

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.Without antivirus,

computer

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able to

cordinally

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cordially

ordinarily

cardinally

destroyed.And with the

computer

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it can be lost some of

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valuable

valueable

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information

. To sum up, the obvious fact is that the

Internet

has revolutionized the way we do many things around us, including storing

information

.But you should not forget the safety of your

computer

.