The cost of flight has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

It is true that the
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rates are decreased over the past ten years. We should
also
acknowledge that the lifestyle and earnings of the general public or the
upper middle
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class
is
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increased which is
in turn
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making the travel in
flights
more affordable. A few years ago travelling
to
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overseas or
to get
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on a flight was a dream
to
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most of the common man in India.
Also
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Indians who were
in
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overseas for their profession leaving their families back in their native place had to limit their visit so they could save more money
instead
of spending it non the flight tickets.
Flights
rates are now affordable
beacuse
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because
the number of
flights
travelling to each destination has
also
increased as the demand increased. The advantage of having
low cost
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flights
is that families can meet up frequently, business trips are easier to plan as there are
lot
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of options available.  There are
also
disadvantages of having too many
flights
and travels as we are polluting the air and causing climatic changes to the ecosystem. As the country grows, the
oppurtunites
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opportunities
and the demand for flight travel
also
goes high. Let us all unitedly act responsibly to make the ecosystem balanced by growing more trees.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Exchange
  • Economic Benefits
  • Personal Growth
  • Educational Growth
  • Budget Airlines
  • Carbon Emissions
  • Global Warming
  • Overtourism
  • Cultural Dilution
  • Homogenization
  • Fossil Fuels
  • Heritage
  • Ecosystems
  • Consumer Culture
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