Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In order to

persue

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pursue

a higher score in an exam, it is a controversial topic about which studying styles are the most successful method for learning. Some students are eager on a group

study

, whereas others

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to individual

study

. In

this

essay, I will elaborate

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viewpoints, which presumably I support

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self studying

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rather than studying with others. On the one hand, studying with

friends

, who are

expert

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in

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particular subjects contributes to various benefits.

First

of all, ingenious

friends

can teach you the subjects that you do not understand resulting in saving enormous time compared to making understand lessons by ourselves. For the statistic exam preparation, I took

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for solving a sophisticated question, while my friend clearly explained, and taught me to solve it by taking only 10 minutes.

Secondly

, your friend can motivate you to read more and more books. According to psychology, humans always duplicate the act and behaviour of

friends

.

As a result

, If you have

friends

, who are eager on reading a book, you will become a bookworm in the future.

On the other hand

, an individual

study

provide

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more concentration, which can be

promising

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method for reading.

For example

, I can spend 3 consecutive hours a day studying alone in a library

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and can finish reading a book, while I cannot finish reading 10 pages in the same amount of time when I am with

friends

because I always end up

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talking with each other.

Furthermore

,

self

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study

is more effective due to being more comfortable. As I can

study

anywhere and anytime without waiting for others, I can read and revise the lesson as much as I want.

For instance

, I can revise the lesson

since

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the morning until

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midnight without disturbing

from

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friends

.

Therefore

,

self

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study

is more efficient to learn a thing. In conclusion, both studying

style

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have

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their own benefits.

However

, I prefer to

study

alone by myself due to

more

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flexible schedule, and more concentration.