Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, nowadays, people watching historical documents on the Internet,

thus

, historical

places

such

as

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museums,

art

galleries will be disappeared in future.

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essay will discuss

benefits

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the benefits

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of visiting

art

places

in

a

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society.

First

, one of the main

tourist

attraction

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attractions

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are

art

and

art

galleries, there is a strong

relation

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between

tourist

and visible

places

in a

country

,

also

, it is undeniable that

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government

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the government

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can receive long-term profit from these

places

.

Moreover

, as long as more humans visit these areas, there

are

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more job

opportunity

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opportunities

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for local people.

For instance

,

Torkey

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Turkey

had been

recieved

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received

huge

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a huge

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amount of money from their

tourist

before

Covid-19

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pandemic, interestingly,

this

country

has several museums and historical buildings,

furthermore

, many

travelers

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visit them and help

economy

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the economy

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of

this

country

. All in all, historical

places

are essential for a

country

to impress international

tourist

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tourists

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.

Second

, all of us went to

art

museums when we were

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a student

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student

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students

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. From

educational

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an educational

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perspective, historical

places

would be the greatest teacher for students, because they can learn what happened in the past in their own

country

.

youngesters

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youngsters

and adults can improve their knowledge about their culture, styles of architect and many other subjects according to visit historical

places

. Especially noteworthy is that,

artistis

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artists

artistic

illustrate their masterpiece of

art

at exhibitions which

usually

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located in

art

buildings,

furthermore

, if

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artworks

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art works

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artworks

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were sold, it

wouldl

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would

be a source of income for artists. In my point of view,

art

places

is

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highly beneficial for population,

thus

, they can't use historical movies or series

instead

of

real

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a real

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place. To conclude, there isn't

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any

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sny

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proof that in the future humanity will use historical programs and won't go to

real

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the real

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art

building

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buildings

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,

actually

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art

places

are highly beneficial for both society and humans.

Acoording

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According

to what I said, I strongly disagree with

given

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statement.