Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that, nowadays, people watching historical documents on the Internet,
thus
, historical places
such
as,
museums, Remove the comma
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art
galleries will be disappeared in future. This
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of visiting Correct article usage
the benefits
art
places
in a
society.
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First
, one of the main tourist
attraction
are Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
art
and art
galleries, there is a strong relation
between Replace the word
relationship
tourist
and visible places
in a country
, also
, it is undeniable that,
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government
can receive long-term profit from these Add an article
the government
places
. Moreover
, as long as more humans visit these areas, there are
more job Change the verb form
is
opportunity
for local people. Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
For instance
, Torkey
had been Correct your spelling
Turkey
recieved
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received
huge
amount of money from their Add an article
a huge
tourist
before Covid-19
pandemic, interestingly, Correct article usage
the Covid-19
this
country
has several museums and historical buildings, furthermore
, many travelers
visit them and help Change the spelling
travellers
economy
of Add an article
the economy
this
country
. All in all, historical places
are essential for a country
to impress international tourist
.
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tourists
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, all of us went to art
museums when we were Add an article
a student
student
. From Fix the agreement mistake
students
educational
perspective, historical Add an article
an educational
places
would be the greatest teacher for students, because they can learn what happened in the past in their own country
. youngesters
and adults can improve their knowledge about their culture, styles of architect and many other subjects according to visit historical Correct your spelling
youngsters
places
. Especially noteworthy is that, artistis
illustrate their masterpiece of Correct your spelling
artists
artistic
art
at exhibitions which usually
located in Add a missing verb
are usually
art
buildings, furthermore
, if Correct your spelling
artworks
art works
were sold, it Correct your spelling
artworks
wouldl
be a source of income for artists. In my point of view, Correct your spelling
would
art
places
is
highly beneficial for population, Change the verb form
are
thus
, they can't use historical movies or series instead
of real
place.
To conclude, there isn't Add an article
a real
the real
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any
sny
proof that in the future humanity will use historical programs and won't go to Correct your spelling
any
real
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the real
art
building
, Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
actually
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,actually
art
places
are highly beneficial for both society and humans. Acoording
to what I said, I strongly disagree with Correct your spelling
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