It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the neoteric era, the development of

technology

is vital.

However

, some believed that the burgeoning of

technology

causes the extirpation of traditional cultures. I somehow concur with the

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however

, I almost entirely contest with the notion. A spotlight will be focused on both sides

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in an accord with the

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of traditional

clothings

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brought about by the modern machines in manufacturing

clothings

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. The Philippines is an exemplar

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, as many ready to wear clothes are now manufactured and sold

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a much cheaper prices as compared to the traditional

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that are being sewed or weaved by the locals. On the other side, I disagree with the

idea

more because I surmise that

technology

and traditional cultures can work hand in hand. For an instance, the advancement of computers

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internet and social media can be used in promoting the local culture of a country.

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, the famous weavers in the northern part of the Philippines are now exporting their products globally.

Hence

, local merchandise can flourish and be exported overseas.

Similarly

, new automation can help ease the burden in manufacturing traditional products. The latest equipments in furniture

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the local rattan and bamboo weavers manufacture more pieces as compared to manual weaving of rattan.

This

will lead to more production and will generate more income

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the indigenous people. To take all things into account,

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essay depicted that I somewhat agree with the

idea

due to the emergence of cheaper RTW clothes; but for the most part, I differ with the notion due to the international promotion and faster manufacturing of commodities brought about by

technology

. At the end of the day, the only constant in life is innovation.