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In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages? bring both positive and negative effects

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As a result
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 of people’s
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 changing rapidly, family
relationships
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 are affected in many places. In my personal opinion, those developments have both positive and negative effects. On the one hand, the rapid changing of people’s
lifestyle
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 brings its own benefits to family
relationships
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, in a modern
social
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 where feminist is coming to be promoted, family
relationships
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 become more equal that the fathers no longer has the right to hurt or disrespect the mothers.
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, the children living in those houses do not have to see the scenes which might be their sad memories throughout their lives.
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, nowadays, technological devices are developed as well as mobile phones are invented, members in a family can make communication with the others easier, especially those who are separated in long distance.
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 families keep in touch and be closer wherever they are.
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, those developments have some disadvantages to family
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 modern technology brings positive effects, it
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 causes gaps between
generations
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. Social platforms and the internet being popular make the younger generation able to approach different cultures around the world, while older
generations
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 have less chance to communicate with their young adults. These
generations
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 do not have the same experiences or viewpoints to discuss or understand each other.
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, the younger
generations
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 now rather spend time on boosting career prospects than marriage and building family feelings, their time for families becoming less than before weakened family
relationships
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. In conclusion, lifestyles changing rapidly has both positive and negative effects on family memberships. People’s
relationship
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relationships
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to
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other members can be improved by balancing between social life and family life.
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