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E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the advantages of using e-mail outweigh the disadvantages?

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Currently,
e-mail
 communication has altered professional and social types of negotiation.
However
, there are some dark sides as well.
This
 essay is going to consider both sides of using
e-mail
. On the one hand in
21st century
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 work process seems to be difficult and
e-mail
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the e-mail
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system
 in
this
 case is demonstrating usefulness. By using
e-mail
 in many job areas and offices people already
keeps
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the
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apply
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time-management. Utilizing
this
 innovation, people could save more time, save an amount of data online, and leaved
paper based
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system
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systems
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 back. As an
example
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 it is true to emphasize GOOGLE and Microsoft companies` online
system
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systems
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. All employees and their managers negotiate and communicate with each other by mail messages. According to their
perspective
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 it is more contemporary and efficient to accomplish co-working and team-building by
e-mail
.
On the other hand
, even if
this
 innovative
system
 brought an abundance of merits,
sometime
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 we are seeing its drawbacks. The dominant factor to explain is internet viruses. Basically, online mail services like
e-mail
 are weakly secured from external attacks, especially from cooking and virus files. Consuming these services is making
risk
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 of losing our valuable data even using these data against us.
For instance
, in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 credit managers of their national bank used to rely on
e-mail
system
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systems
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 to
agreeing
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onagreeing
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 bank operations,
as a
result
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 after
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some time
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sometime
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 their bank operations showed
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an error
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error
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 and
a
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plenty of money and
crypto currency
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cryptocurrency
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 have been stolen by hackers.
Second
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 big factor is that
e-mail
also
 increases workload in
job
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the job
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, and it will bring stress and other unpleasant impressions on workers. To sum up, we have considered that
e-mail
 is assisting us to keep the time, but
also
this
 contemporary service
sometime
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sometimes
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 making issues connected with virus attacks and other objections. We see that
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 is outweighing
benefits
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the benefits
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 in
this
 case.
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