Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Nowadays, some people assume that
zoos
bring no benefits to our world and should be stopped. In fact, there are one problem zoos
bring is keep animals
in cages
and one way to replace if
Correct pronoun usage
them if
zoos
closed is move
Fix the infinitive
to move
animals
to national parks
. In
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This
this
essay will discuss about
these sides.
Remove the preposition
apply
Firstly
, the problem zoos
bring to animals
is keep
them in Change the verb form
is keeping
cages
, that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
violation
. As all of us know that wild Add an article
a violation
animals
can the best develop in wild
environment. Add an article
a wild
the wild
Besides
, they can hunt their favorite
food by themselves and freedom moving with large space. Change the spelling
favourite
However
, when live
in Change the verb form
living
zoos
people keep them inside cages
, it isn’t only prevention them
develop hunt ability Correct pronoun usage
they
also
influence their health. For instance
, according to some research by expert show that some big animals
like lion, tiger…when released them out wild environment their hunt ability less than other lions, tigers lived in wild
environment Add an article
the wild
a wild
long
time. Add an article
a long
Moreover
, they also
easier to die and reduce their longevity.
Add a missing verb
are also
Secondly
, there are
one way to replace Change the verb form
is
zoos
if they closed is move
Fix the infinitive
to move
animals
to national parks
. I think national parks
are best
place for wild Change the article
the best
animals
with large area
and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
animals
can avoid hunted
by humans. Add a missing verb
being hunted
Moreover
, Researcher
can come to national Fix the agreement mistake
Researchers
parks
to research about behavior
and habit of each Change the spelling
behaviour
animals
that can help to maintain them better.
In summary, Change to a singular noun
animal
although
zoos
used to become entertainment place
for people. Fix the agreement mistake
places
However
, nowadays they realized that zoos
have negative
side with Add an article
a negative
animals
like keeping animals
in cages
is violation
. Add an article
a violation
Furthermore
, they also
want to move animals
to national parks
and close zoos
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- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
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