Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

It is undeniable that the development of a nation, especially that of a developed country, comes at the cost of detrimental impacts on
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environment.
Consequently
, they hold the most responsibility for the phenomenon called
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warning
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warming
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, which can severely
affected
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different life aspects.
However
, there are
also
a number of solutions critical to minimise the damage of global warming on people's
live
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. The major reason why global warming is considered a huge issue is that its impacts are so widespread and complex.
First
and foremost, an increase of only 1 degree Celsius may appear as minuscule, but
such
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in temperature
have
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already been able to affect human's life.
For example
, because the polar ice caps are melting away due to
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climate, the amount of water they hold will be released into the ocean, which
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for the rise in sea level.
Consequently
,
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costal
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coastal
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cities are likely to experience flooding, soil salinization, and more dramatic weather events. Many cities built around the coastal areas has been forecasted to disappear in the following decades.
Moreover
, global warming comes with other events
such
as El
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Nino
and La Nina, the abnormal increase and decrease of temperature in the
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tropical eastern Pacific Ocean and wind patterns, that can detrimentally affected agricultural, aquaculture, and forestry economic activities.
Conversely
, there are still measures that can be utilized, requiring both community and individual responsibility. The
first
method is to regulate the amount of greenhouse gas released during the production of items. One example of
such
is in America, where
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threshold is scrutinized, which has forced factory owners and large corporations to adapt, adopting more efficient production methods.
Therefore
, the
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of greenhouses being emitted into the atmosphere has reduced in recent years.
Furthermore
, people can
also
reduce their carbon footprints by changing their habits through means
such
as commuting by public transportation or consuming less poultry. In conclusion, the impacts of global warming are detrimental to nations and countries regardless of geopolitical matters;
consequently
. they should all cooperate to develop and deploy solutions.
However
, that does not denounce personal responsibility,
on the contrary
, it encourages people to participate in the fight to protect their and their children's life.
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