Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on sports. Why ? Is it a positive or a negative development ?
Today's era is known as a technological era. Nowadays people like to use the latest technology and gadgets. In
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such
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time
in
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computer
games
and in other indoor activities. there are some reasons
behind the popularity of outdoor sports are fallen down. This
development
is considered as
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a
negative
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a negative
development
. The reason behind spending more time
on computers and why this
development
is consider
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as
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a
negative
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a negative
development
, both these
will be discussed adequately in the following paragraphs.
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reasons
behind more usage of computers. The first
and foremost cause is an advertisement of computer
games
and live streaming of online games
. To explain it, youngsters can see the frequent advertisement of online computer
games
on television which attracts them because of rewards and gifts. The live streaming of online games
by famous gamers is another reason for more popularity of computer
games
. For example
, some famous game players show their skills on youtube by live broadcasting that attracts youth to spend their time
on the
online activity Correct article usage
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instead
of physical activity.
This
development
is considered as a negative development
because of less time
spending on sports activities. More time
in front of gadgets leads to underdeveloped
mind and Correct article usage
an underdeveloped
narrow
mindset. Correct article usage
a narrow
secondly
, a good growth of body
depends on physical exercise. If children have not spent more time
on theplayground
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the playground
then
they do not develop physical skills and also
the growth of the brain is affected. In addition
, another bad point of usage of electronic items is emission
of radiation from electric items. Add an article
the emission
an emission
That is
very harmful to our organs of the body
and mainly eyes are badly affected due to high usage of internet devices.
To conclude, an
advertisement and live broadcasting are the main Correct article usage
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reasons
behind this
development
. Effects on body
and body
parts and radiation emission are the reasons
which indicate that the
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this
development
is surely considered as a negative development
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