In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night until they are accompanied by an adult while others believe that teenagers should be given the freedom to move. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In the US, quite a few places have restrictions where young ones are not permitted outdoors, post evening.
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needs to be adhered to by them unless they are not accompanied by elders. Many sections of society assume that movement restrictions for non-adults are not right. Let me share my views in the Linking Words
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The United States of America has widely known for people-friendly policies and freedom for everyone is one of the important rights of its citizens. The safety of people is one of the top priorities for any government around the world. To achieve a peaceful living environment, curfews are imposed to restrict the free-flowing of people movements. Linking Words
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is particularly important for young girls or boys to ensure the safety of their lives. Linking Words
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, a single girl can be easily targetted by anti-social elements and the same can be easily avoided if a young girl is accompanied by an elderly.
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, many socialists argue that teenagers should not be protected all the time. They should be let free and enough guidance should be given to them to encounter any situation, even they are roaming on streets at odd times of the day. Linking Words
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will develop a sense of responsibility and at the same time build the courage to tackle any sort of resistance out there. Linking Words
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, a teenage girl should be asked to carry a pepper spray that can help in the advent of any unseen.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite