Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.
Population explosion in developing countries made people
to
affirm that Change the verb form
apply
cultivation
of genetically altered Correct article usage
the cultivation
crops
will help to meet the growing demand Use synonyms
of
food. Change preposition
for
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essay will Linking Words
firstly
look at the merits of Linking Words
this
idea and later Linking Words
about
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at
demerits
of the same.
For starters, Correct article usage
the demerits
GM
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crops
have been Use synonyms
modifed
to express a gene that will overcome the deficiencies of traditional Correct your spelling
modified
crops
like resistance against pests, effective utility of the resources, lesser duration and improved quality. Use synonyms
For instance
, BT cotton, a Linking Words
GM
crop gained popularity among Use synonyms
indian
farmers for its reduced cultivation costs, increased yielding on a smaller piece of land thereby enhancing profit. Change the capitalization
Indian
Furthermore
, it will be a boon to densely populated countries, where the limited resources that are available can be effectively utilised to maximise the food production at a shorter time interval and feed a larger population at an optimal cost.
On the flip side, Linking Words
GM
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crops
do have some pitfalls. Use synonyms
Firstly
, these Linking Words
crops
can lead to health issues in human beings. Use synonyms
For instance
, various studies have documented Linking Words
higher
incidence of allergic reactions to the people who consume Add an article
a higher
GM
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crops
compared to control groups. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
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this
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these
crops
can have a negative impact on the biodiversity of Use synonyms
ecosystem
by exclusive growth of one species over others.
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the ecosystem
an ecosystem
GM
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crops
significantly minimise the usage of pesticides and insecticides and enhance Use synonyms
the
productivity Correct article usage
apply
inspite
of limited resources thereby, helping to feed a larger scale of people. Correct your spelling
in spite
However
, health issues and hazards to Linking Words
environment
are a matter of debate. Add an article
the environment
A comprehensive
research is necessary to evaluate the adverse effects of Remove the article
Comprehensive
GM
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crops
thereby improving the outcome in the future.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...