Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from others sources (such as the internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that children at higher institutions gain more
knowledge
while learning from their professors as compared to learning from online sources. I agree with the given statement and there are two reasons why I think so and they will be explained in the
next
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To begin
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work books
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source of
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theoretical
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fact that publications are primarily based on theory concepts when
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taught
thought
to students in the classrooms and people pay more attention to
such
ideas and opinions.
For instance
, listening to scientific inventions and early discoveries prompt people to think out of the box. In short, teachers play a
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vital
role in teaching theories and conceptual
knowledge
.
Secondly
, online learning is not effective. Undoubtedly, communities taking online classes struggle to understand important concepts due to
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communication.
Although
technology is an important part of the modern era many people still find it
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difficult
to use technology and
as a
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they start
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interst
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interest
in academics. To illustrate, many
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going children show no interest in online learning due to poor
knowledge
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technological gadgets.
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of radio and television do can not be considered a good source of education. In conclusion, I strongly affirm that
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offline learning is
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and requires more
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it is certainly an effective way to teach
masses
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effectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized attention
  • immediate feedback
  • structured learning
  • curriculum
  • dynamic interaction
  • engagement
  • cognitive skills
  • access to expertise
  • specialists
  • comprehensive
  • progressively
  • digestible
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