Describe a time in the last two years when you disagreed with friends who were going to do something you did not want to do. What did you do? Why?

Sometimes people's opinions can differ from each other, and, often,
this
leads to quarrels, where
everyone
is trying to prove their rightness. What I consider right in
such
situations is a calm discussion. In my opinion,
this
is the best way to come to an understanding without destroying relationships with each other. Recently our teacher suggested going out with all class to enjoy our
last
year together.
Everyone
agreed, but later, they decided not to invite the teacher in order to feel freer. Only two of us, my friend and I, refused. We didn't want to let her down, as she kept saying that she would miss us when we leave school. She has always been very patient and kind with us. She didn't deserve to be treated that way. My friend joined me when I raised
this
question. We just discussed it all together, no one was yelling or arguing. At
first
, my classmates didn't understand what was wrong, but
then
when I explained that it's not a due attitude towards her and gave reasons why I thought so, they said they felt guilty. We decided to spend the day in the only amusement park in our town. Despite her age, our teacher sat on almost all of the rides with us. She was taking photos of us to place them in our graduation vignettes. We enjoyed ourselves on that day.
Everyone
was so kind to her, I suppose, they were compensating for what they were going to do.
That is
exactly what she deserves. In conclusion, I would like to say that people should admit that
everyone
has their own opinion and the chance of a match is not great. One should take
this
into account and deal with all disagreements wisely.
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