E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, and this impact has been positive as well as negative. Do the advantages of e-mail using outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people believe that e-mail plays
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crucial role in society because of its beneficial and negative use at
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daily life. So,
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why the way of operating with E-messages simplify
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interacting with people, and how maintaining
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electronic messages causes extra working
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First
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us from a lot of problems with relationships.
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, many employers do not have enough time for communication with their relatives and friends, and in these cases, it is preferable to be in touch with them via e-mail chats.
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, in 90% of situations,
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work at least 8
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out with closes. So, in order to cope with it, they use
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online mails.
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pressure for
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worker
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by over-working
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got more electronic letters than they can reply, it causes
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a feeling
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feeling
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of stress and
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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