Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in schools are increasing. Some people are suggesting that teaching
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international news for secondary students is not important on their school timings.
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both sides of
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in detail and provide evidence as to why that subject is not needed for the learners.
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with, some people are allowing that it is needed since many updated courses are now implemented as early as
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school for the reason of, it is timely relevant in their
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level of education when they are pursuing to study in universities or colleges.
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, they believe that it will help them to prepare
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what they are taking what they want to be in choosing their careers.
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, the news all over the world is vital to the public which awareness is presenting what is happening around us. If at
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stage we are obliged to study and learned international news.
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, others are having
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that additional subject to learn is not needed and
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they can focus on what they really want. In our generation nowadays reports can be seen everywhere especially
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social media. Added to that we can be updated all the time with
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of gadgets that everybody is having even grades schooler. In relation to that, they can use the extra time to develop and research
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the subjects that they are having difficulties
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In conclusion, wiser use of time can be more
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to each one of us. Basic information should
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to discuss
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in schools that can be
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and if they are interested in more deepen understanding,
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they will have the
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willingness
to learn more.
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the individuals to be
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on the event
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to them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global awareness
  • Critical thinking
  • Global citizenship
  • Cultural diversity
  • Communication skills
  • Historical context
  • World affairs
  • Academic subjects
  • Bias
  • Misinformation
  • Age-appropriate
  • Media literacy
  • Educational enrichment
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