Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?
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there is a steady growth in Add a comma
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amount of Correct article usage
the
people
becoming obese and the lack of physical fitness. This
essay will discuss the reasons of
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question such
as high-priced of healthy foods
and gym
membership and it will be constructed TV shows which constitute cooking
of healthy Correct article usage
the cooking
foods
to solute this
problem.
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a plethora
fibers
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healthy
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a healthy
the healthy
lifestyle
of people
, but this
healthy foods
and subscription
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subscriptions
for
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to
gym
are very expensive. Add an article
the gym
People
eat the
unhealthy Correct article usage
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food
due to their insufficient time, health unawareness and cost, the fast
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fast-food
food
are
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foods
. In meantime, in gym
clubs, people
have to pay even more money for the gym
and for the trainer. For example
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experience
my friend Add a comma
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prefer
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prefers
healthy
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a healthy
lifestyle
and he spend
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spends
for
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on
food
and gym
than others. Correct article usage
the gym
This
proves that in our city a healthy lifestyle
costs a lot of money.
The possible solution for this
problem is a
making TV Correct article usage
apply
shows
about Change the noun form
show
cooking
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the cooking
of
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apply
foods
at home. The most
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of
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people
cook the
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foods
for their family thanks to culinary TV programs which consider ways of cooking a
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type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
foods
. It is necessary to increase the number of cooking shows that teach people
how to cook healthy food
at home, both good and cheap. For instance
, there is a program "Eat and lose weight!" on the TNT channel where the host of the show calls on a professional chef and a nutritionist for help, and they come up with how to make a cutlet or a chocolate cake from a very high-calorie to cutlet or a chocolate cake, but half the calories.
To conclude, in this
modern world the number of people
who have an unhealthy lifestyle
increase suddenly day by day, because high-cost of the good foods
and gym
membership. The possible solution for this
is increase
the Fix the infinitive
to increase
quantity
of television shows for cooking healthy Change the quantifier
number
foods
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