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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

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Some of the companies have
mandatory
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 unique dress
code
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codes
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 for their
employees
, which they wear during
the
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apply
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working time. Despite wearing
uniforms
 can be uncomfortable for the
staff
, I totally believe that
this
 can help to establish equality among workers.
Uniforms
 are needed to distinguish
staff
 from
non-
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non-employees
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employees
 at the workplace. So customers or other people can easily find them for any request.
In addition
, these clothes can help advertise the company where these
employees
 work. It helps to create an image and gives additional benefits. Organizations that have their
uniforms
also
 can save money and time
of
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employees
.
This
 is due to the fact that choosing clothes and buying needed to spend a precious time and money which are very important for
staff
.
Moreover
, special clothes can be safer and more useful.
Furthermore
, wearing
unique
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 dress code makes all
staff
 feel like their equal.
Employees
 from different backgrounds won't feel uncomfortable while being poor or rich. It
is improve
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 productivity and performance of
staff
 as they will focus on their work. In conclusion, there are many benefits for
employees
 to wear their own company
uniforms
 for both the company and
employees
.
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