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E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication , but this impact has been negative as well as positive . Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages ?

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It is an unarguable truth that the use of electronic communication has significantly changed the way we communicate with each other, both at work and in society. And it is
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 true that not all of the effects of
this
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email
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 the individual .
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and ideas , it puts even more pressure on employees . Other objections to e-mail for both social and professional users include the fact that it requires people to spend even more time at the computer doing their work . Another objection to using e-mails is that, despite these terrible consequences, e-mail has
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that have improved our lives. One of these obvious benefits of using
email
 is that it is a quick and easy way to communicate with family, friends and colleagues wherever you are. It not only allows people to stay in touch with each other. It's a huge advance over earlier communication systems, and the low cost of
email
 means that it's very widely used. To summarize, despite some obvious drawbacks to using
email
,
this
 fast and convenient technology has greatly improved our ability to communicate both professionally and socially.
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, I believe that e-mail has brought us far more advantages than disadvantages.
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