Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it’s popular and how does it affect society?

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Nowadays, criminal TV series are getting popular. Hundreds of movies and series, that are related to crimes, have been producing every year. I tend to think that it is only because people like to watch interesting stories and it brings awareness to them.

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watching dramas more than other genres. There is

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plenty of legends and facts in history about popular

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and some of them are famous in mass culture.

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, Al Capone, Richard Ramirez, Henry Howard Holmes. Their biography is like

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like An American crime, Legend, Bronson, Peaky Blinders and others.

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, it has a positive impact on society because it informs us about various numerous wrongdoings.

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Bad series shows us the evil of drugs and how dangerous is to be related to drug dealers, Escobar tells us about kidnapping, murders and homicides to inform us.

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of troubles and perpetrators. The point I am trying to make is that crime movies and TV shows are not as bad as they are said to be. They are just entertainment tools. And sometimes they can teach us to the different important things.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Intricate plots
Suspenseful storytelling
Unexpected twists
Psychological appeal
Curiosity
Safe exploration
Criminal behavior
Relatability
Identification
Pursuit of justice
Moral dilemmas
Human struggle
Educational aspect
Law enforcement system
Practical self-defense tips
Raise awareness
Social commentary
Corruption
Inequality
Effectiveness of the justice system

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Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it’s popular and how does it affect society?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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