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Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality at work. To what extent you agree or disagree?

#people #employers #care #employees #dress #quality #work
Every government
Employees
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 has a different
dress
 code which is decided by government authority. some people
belive
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believe
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 that
employers
 should not worry about what employee should wear and focus on their productive
work
 while
,
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 other
opine
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 that it is necessary to wear a decent
dress
 at
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the work
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work place
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workplace
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 which is decided by their
employers
.I firmly believe in
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the later
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later
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latter
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 view. There are many reasons to wear a
perticular
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particular
 type of cloth at
job
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the job
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 place.
Firstly
,When we maintain
dress
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a dress
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 code, It shows respect to our
job
.
Secondly
, When every employee
wear
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wears
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uniform
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a uniform
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 it shows
decipline
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discipline
 at
work
.
Finally
, By wearing
uniform
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a uniform
the uniform
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, people can easily recognize your
job
 profession. To illustrate, We can identify polices , doctors, lawyers and
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firefighters
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fire fighters
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firefighters
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 by their
uniform
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uniforms
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 anywhere in
world
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the world
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.
However
,If
employers
 don't have any
uniform
 or
guidline
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guideline
 for their firm, employees will wear whatever they want. Most people will understand that what type of
dress
 is fit for
job
 while, some will not think about it and wear irrelevant
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clothes
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cloths
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clothes
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 which will end up affecting to
reputation
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the reputation
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 of company and profession.
Also
, if no one will guide these
type
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types
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 of employees
then
 they don't get
idea
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the idea
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 that they look unprofessional. To sum up, I totally disagree with
given
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 statement that
employers
 do not have to worry about
employess
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employees
atire
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attire
are
retire
.It is necessary to wear
decent
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a decent
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dress
 at
work place
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workplace
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 and for
that
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that employer
those employers
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employers
 have their
uniform
 or make some
guidlines
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guidelines
 about
dress
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the dress
a dress
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.
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