In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Everybody

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take

shalter

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shelter

most

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comfortable conditions and

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from person to person.

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countries

people

believe that

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owing

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a home is more

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disadvantage

preference compared to renting one. Personally, ı think that renting

house

more easy choice but it has positive and negative

situation

both of them.

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situation

don’t

losing time,energy and

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have a lot of fixed consumption for owning your home. Some europian countries

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a really different

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and conditions.

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, when ı visit

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, I notice that

people

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have

family

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life

and they

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power

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relationship with their relatives and households, they are living alone in

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their

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they prefer minimalist

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way

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, they generally are living single flats and small apartments. Since they have like

this

life- style

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, they may not want to own their

house

, If they do, they will lose time,energy and

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, it can be

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situation

for

people

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situation

is that

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create special areas,wares and atmospheres. Generally, all renting

house

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houses

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are similar architects,

size

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,articles and

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. İt leads to

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similar

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house

atmosphere for all

people

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something

to your

house

, sometimes you are exposed to

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their

landlors

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landlords

landlord

about renting rules and they

can’t

find enough place for decoration. As a consequence,

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negative

situation

reason for limited

house

life

and depend on the

landholds

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landholders

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rules. To sum up, personally, there are positive and negative situations of owning your

house

or renting one. They may

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losing

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time,energy and opposite, they might

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creating your special wanting. I think that there are different results in both aspects.

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ownership
renting
importance
sense of security
stability
financial investment
asset
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belonging
community
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future generations
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control
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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Your opinion

You recently registered for a course and you cannot attend the class for some reasons. Write a letter to your course instructor, and in your letter Introduce yourself. Explain the situation. and say what action you would like to take.

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