some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future,such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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believe that all
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just
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in the interested
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in developing
countries
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there are many youth people and there are not many job
opportunity
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for young people. in
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countries
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young people prefer to
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course
becouse
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because
this
subject help us to find specialization and
then
find a proper job
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some
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do not agree about
this
subject.they believe that universities just apply students to
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in the future and society needs them.
for example
in developed countries
university
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just apply in cours of government offices and industrial factories needs. in my
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if the students
study
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course
we find
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best way how to use it and
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lead to entrepreneurship and
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new opportunities. in
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it is difficult to choose a better subject to
study
in
university
but we can help
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student
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to choose
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course
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