Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

It is undeniable that nowadays

technology

has involved in our daily life much more than in the past. The using of

technology

to monitor what user is doing or saying has been increasing.

However

, the

users

might not know that they are being tracked by

this

invention.

This

essay will discuss

about

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the pros and cons of

this

technology

and firmly say that the benefits do outweigh the disadvantages. There are many advantages of

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monitoring

technology

.

Firstly

,

this

invention will definitely help

personlize

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personalize

contents which

users

are interested

, so

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that

users

do not have to waste their time to read or watch something that they are not interested

.

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When people are into playing

surfskates

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surf skates

surf skate

and keep searching about them on the internet,

for instance

, Facebook will show the content about

surfskating

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surf skating

.

Secondly

, monitoring

technology

especially security

camera

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cameras

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has been involved in many

crime

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investigations. It helps police to capture crime scenes or even see criminals' faces,

hence

police can catch them easier compare to the past.

On the other hand

, being tracked by

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technology

might affect our

life

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in negative ways. To use

this

technology

, we often have to fill our personal

infornation

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information

to the server.

This

may lead to the leakage of

users

' personal information.

For example

, recently there

are

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some personal information from online shopping website in Thailand have been leaked out and been used for the fraud.

Moreover

, getting monitored without knowing is still

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a

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criticism in society whether

this

break our human rights or not. In conclusion,

technology

has been developed and used widely in present. The usage of

technology

to monitor people

behavior

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is useful for each

individuals

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and cities' securities.

Although

there might be drawbacks that we have to concern

, the

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advantages of

this

development are much more valuable and

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out weigh

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those disadvantages.