When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

IF WE ARE GIVEN A CHANCE TO CHOOSE BETWEEN
WORK LIFE
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OR NO
WORK LIFE
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WORK-LIFE
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, IT DEPENDS ON EACH PERSON'S INTEREST AND CIRCUMSTANCES. I
COMPLETLY
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AGREE WITH THE GIVEN STATEMENT BECAUSE EVERYONE PREFER A LIFE WITH MORE FUN AND ENTERTAINMENT. THE ONLY REASON WHY PEOPLE ARE WORKING IS TO EARN MONEY.
FOR INSTANCE
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LAST
WEEK I HAD A CONVERSATION WITH SOME OF MY
COLLEGUES
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COLLEAGUES
. OUT OF THEM, ONE PERSON WAS REALLY NOT INTERESTED IN CONTINUING HER PROFESSION BECAUSE OF HER HEALTH ISSUES BUT THE ONLY REASON WHY SHE IS STICKING TO THE JOB IS THE COMPENSATION AND THE BASIC PAYMENT THAT SHE
RECIEVES
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RECEIVES
RECEIVED
. AT THAT POINT I UNDERSTOOD THAT THE ULTIMATE AIM OF EVERY INDIVIDUAL
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THIS
EARTH IS
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial stability
  • personal interests
  • social isolation
  • structured daily routine
  • sense of purpose
  • achievement
  • boredom
  • overworking
  • burnout
  • hobbies
  • family time
  • work pressures
  • stress
  • health issues
  • social interactions
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