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Traffic problems in modern town and cities.discuss about cause and slutions

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Traffic
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congestion
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 in modern
cities
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 is a conservation issue.as grow up evolution of technology every single part of life has been affected that can be seen for the
road
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 condition.
Traffic
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congestion
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 is caused by different factors,
such
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 car accidents, bad weather, inadequate roadway capacity. lack of space on the
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 had been considering as
a
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 most important reason for
traffic
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. since there is no standard
road
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 condition and the number of cars increased dramatically.
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,
road
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 and transport services suffer when they are overused.
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, nowadays many
people
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 have to find a good job opportunity move to the
cities
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 so unplanned growth contributes to the
traffic
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congestion
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 of crowded metro place. No wonder in matristic lifestyle that everyone suffers from
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 disease which is called hurry sickness, not many
people
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 place a high value on driving role so
cities
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 will be faced with enormous
traffic
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. Eventually,
traffic
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congestion
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 makes a problem for City dwellers.
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, they have spent a lot of time in order to reach word or any takes they want to do .in additional
traffic
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 causes air pollution
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 why
people
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 who are accommodated in
cities
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 are in danger with some problem related to health
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 hear diseases lung cancer and so on. There are some suggestions to reduce
traffic
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.
first
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 and foremost is to encourage
people
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 to use more public transport.so authorities should improve public transport and provide a safe network of walking and cycling. Another way to reduce
traffic
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 is using radio reports or to apply automated
traffic
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 management systems to optimize
traffic
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 flow. Overall, in terms of ,issue it is a
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 to balance between
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 the population, the
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 in cars and the situation of the
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. government should have more attention to city problem they have to know
traffic
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 can affect another aspect of life and
people
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 respect any role that put by their authorities .so we can be successful and go down
traffic
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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