In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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read newspapers. Some
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see that
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and children watch TV
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encourage children.
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publicizes
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these actions increased newspapers and magazines In
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love watching TV –
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in China some regions.
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stopped it on the children’s channels as they made
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about bringing some hurt of
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quantity of crime. Some
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it. In conclusion correct and good
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help to develop their
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and
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into society.
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should establish
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