Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility, while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays , most people argue , to be happy is mainly the duty of a human being where others
believes
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that there are some other crucial points leading to
happiness
. In my opinion ,
Although
its
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the responsibility of an individual to be heady , some other factors are
also
playing a vital role in
happiness
.
To begin
with , the
person
should be strong enough . As if anything bad happens in his
life
like if he does not get a good result of his long hard work , it's the
person
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duty to tackle that situation and does not let that situation be heavy on himself because he has the option to try again .
In addition
, the individual should have control
on
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his emotions . Even though there are many emotional moments in his
life
where it is not important to be sad , he does not have to pay attention to those silly things and try to be busy with his own development .
On the other hand
, there are some other points which are important for
happiness
. Situations in
life
. For ,example if a
person
tried a lot even after his failure and he is able to achieve that goal or job but when it is time to join , the accident
is occur
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and he loses somebody parts now what he will do ? How he can be happy ? So the situation must be good to be happy . The family should be supportive . As the family is playing a crucial role in everyone's
life
, they have to support their child in his doing because if guardian stop their offspring
to
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doing what he wants to do or he is doing
then
it really affects his
happiness
. In conclusion ,
however
, the
person
should be strong enough , situations in the
life
and support by the family is playing a vital role in his
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Individual responsibility
  • External factors
  • Personal choices
  • Mindset
  • Attitude
  • Mental health
  • Self-improvement
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Financial stability
  • Social relationships
  • Supportive family
  • Environment
  • Living conditions
  • Neighborhood safety
  • Cultural factors
  • Interplay
  • Dispositions
  • Case studies
  • Practical strategies
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