You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven't heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.
Hello sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your hotel
services especially
with the central heating system which was not working properly. Basically, I booked your Add the comma(s)
, especially
hotel
on 24th June as I was having
an urgent international assignment on the Wrong verb form
had
zoom
app in the morning ,the reason for which I booked your Capitalize word
Zoom
hotel
but due to
noise from the heating ,system I was not able to represent
my presentation properly and was not able to lock the deal which I was expecting.
Let me explain the situation to you , at that time I talked to the manager of the Verb problem
present
hotel
and he assured me that I will
be refunded my tariff but I haven’t got any confirmation till now .Wrong verb form
would
Moreover
,disturbance due to
the negligence of the hotel
staff caused hindrance in my professional work.
Lastly
, I want that
designated payment should be made to my account as early as possible or I will have to take legal action against your firm.I want Correct determiner usage
the
that
central heating system of the room in which I stayed should be replaced so that Correct determiner usage
the
others
customers don’t face the same problem Correct quantifier usage
other
like
me and your staff should be vigilant in checking all the equipment in the room before allotting to any other customer.
Awaiting to hear from your side soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jagjot.Change preposition
as
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task response
The letter does not fully address the task requirements. It should focus more on the dissatisfaction caused by the faulty heating system and the lack of compensation. The writing needs to be more specific and clear regarding the desired outcome.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing lack formality and professionalism. Use a more appropriate salutation and closing for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite